Following up on the user testing/screening I decided to go back to my edit, create a new sequence on Premiere Pro and begin to look at alternative endings to the documentary. Going off of the feedback I got I knew I had to bring the whole things back to tattoos and to remind the viewer that it all comes down to these tattoos that mean so much to each person.
I began by going back over all of the footage and looked for some key snippets where they talk about their tattoo, why they got it, what it means to them and how others react to it. After a long time of going back and forward I found what I needed. I wanted to bring it back around to Aaron, then Lisa and finish on Evan. So that’s what I did!
I have the main parts put together so now I just have to show Ian on Monday or Tuesday and see what he thinks of it and just check to make sure I’m going in the right direction.
Every year there is a brochure/programme put together by the lecturers for the final year show. We have been asked to choose an image that represents our project and then a 150 words description of what your project is.
For the picture I found it quiet difficult because there are 3 people that feature in my documentary but then I also wanted to incorporate the tattoos into the image after the feedback I got in the screening. So I decided to open up photoshop and see what I could do!
Above is the final result. The tattoo shots are ones I got when I spent an hour in a tattoo studio just observing and thankfully the gentleman getting the tattoo didn’t mind me filming him or the tattoo artist.
Yesterday I took part in the screening and to be honest, I really didn’t know what to expect. I didn’t know if I was going in the right direction with my edit or where everyone else was with their final edit. Luckily everyone seemed to be in the same boat. Some of the work I seen from my classmates was brilliant and I was so happy for them because everyone has been under pressure the past few months and to see it all coming together is amazing.
When my turn came I was slightly nervous but I had to keep reminding myself that it was only a screening and I still have time to fix things that people may not be sure on. After the rough cut had ended it was time for feedback….! All in all it was good. One of the main things that popped up was the fact that as the viewer watched it, they began to forget about the tattoos themselves which takes away from the whole point of the documentary. This was something I was willing to take on board because yes, the tattoos didn’t feature too much within their story but I wanted this documentary to focus mainly on the stories because I think that’s what people will connect with and that’s what I want to get across. I do agree that I need to incorporate tattoos into it more though which is what I will hopefully do in the introduction (which wasn’t completed for this screening).
Things I’ve taken from this screening/feedback session
- Focus more on the tattoo’s as well as the stories
- Don’t rush from one story to the next, allow some time for their story to absorb
- Include more about Evan’s job when working in the olympics
- Work on colour correction for Lisa’s interview shots
D-Day is getting closer and closer and so it’s time to get a rough cut together for a screening on Wednesday the 26th of April (just 2 weeks before the deadline).
Having gotten Evan’s interview on Friday it is now time for me to incorporate that into the documentary along with Aaron and Lisa’s interviews. As spoken about previously I had come up with a structure in my meeting with Ian and so I’m going to continue with that structure and see how it turns out.
As I’m using Hugh’s assignment for the introduction I’m going to leave that out of the rough cut for now because that requires the use of after effects etc and I just haven’t had time to sit down and get that completed so the rough cut for the screening will be complete minus the introduction!
Again, like any other cuts I have done in throughout this production, all editing was done in premiere pro where I could create numerous timelines and incorporate them all into the one.
So fingers crossed everything starts to take shape and I have something worth showing on Wednesday! 🙂
Yesterday I finally got to sit down with Evan and hear more about his story. The location that was chosen was his therapy clinic because that’s where he is most of the time and it seemed fitting with the back story to his life and to show his success over the past few years as a sports therapist.
After getting some footage of Evan getting his latest tattoo, it was exciting to see the finished piece after it had almost 2 weeks to heal. I also had the pleasure of hearing the story behind 2 other tattoo’s Evan had gotten previously.
It was great to hear Evan’s story and see all he has achieved at the age of 30. Seeing all of the singlet jerseys from the athletes he had worked with in many olympics hanging on the wall of his studio, you could see how happy it made him and it showed a major part of his life.
Today I went o a local tattoo studio to try and get some shots of the preparation that takes place before a tattoo begins. Unfortunately things didn’t go to plan and while I was there on time, I wasn’t invited over to film at the tattoo station until all of the prep had already been done! This was a slight bit of a bummer because I really wanted those shots but I do appreciate it is their job and they have to stick to their own schedule and the equipment used for tattooing is quiet expensive which I also have to take into consideration! Luckily the customer allowed me to get some shots of the placement of the tattoo etc and I got a few shots around the studio itself so it wasn’t a day wasted!